http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog Feel free to post comments or suggestions about the worksheets. Thu, 16 Feb 2012 12:52:16 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=268&cpage=1#comment-5618 Jeremy Frierson Thu, 16 Feb 2012 12:52:16 +0000 http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=268#comment-5618 @Alexis Whiting, I'd have to agree strongly with what you stated, "for someone to enjoy the action of succeeding in life they must first know what it is to fail" because you can't appreciate something you have without struggle. And the interesting point that you brought up is how the second stanza could to war itself and the satisfaction of the victory after the lost comrades which symbolizes failures. Right on the money Alexis. @Alexis Whiting, I’d have to agree strongly with what you stated, “for someone to enjoy the action of succeeding in life they must first know what it is to fail” because you can’t appreciate something you have without struggle. And the interesting point that you brought up is how the second stanza could to war itself and the satisfaction of the victory after the lost comrades which symbolizes failures. Right on the money Alexis.

]]> http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=261&cpage=1#comment-5608 Ashley Ortega Wed, 15 Feb 2012 20:23:39 +0000 http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=261#comment-5608 @Bria Bradshaw, ...... I like your interpretation of the poem and how clearly it is to understand @Bria Bradshaw, …… I like your interpretation of the poem and how clearly it is to understand

]]> http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=261&cpage=1#comment-5593 Stephanie Castillo Tue, 14 Feb 2012 23:53:59 +0000 http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=261#comment-5593 @Saarah Chaudhri,Your analysis of the poem was dead on. As Nicole said it flows very nicely and i particularly enjoyed the vocabulary you used to get your point across. Additionally i completely agree with your thoughts on the poem and i loved the way you ended it by saying it "gives the “little people” a voice in this tough society." @Saarah Chaudhri,Your analysis of the poem was dead on. As Nicole said it flows very nicely and i particularly enjoyed the vocabulary you used to get your point across. Additionally i completely agree with your thoughts on the poem and i loved the way you ended it by saying it “gives the “little people” a voice in this tough society.”

]]> http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=261&cpage=1#comment-5588 Miranda Pitcher Tue, 14 Feb 2012 17:21:27 +0000 http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=261#comment-5588 @Dionismary Herrada, I agree with you completely. This is kind of the same thing I wrote. @Dionismary Herrada, I agree with you completely. This is kind of the same thing I wrote.

]]> http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=261&cpage=1#comment-5586 Alexander Monsalve Tue, 14 Feb 2012 16:47:35 +0000 http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=261#comment-5586 @Jessica Broche, Jessy your interpretation of this poem was excellent. I can agree with it at many levels. Especially when you relate it to your own life and sports. I too played sports in highschool, especially soccer, and sucess had so much worth going up against the state champions for a second time after a loss. This poem is not only excellent, but a source of insparation according to our interpretations. Good Job. @Jessica Broche, Jessy your interpretation of this poem was excellent. I can agree with it at many levels. Especially when you relate it to your own life and sports. I too played sports in highschool, especially soccer, and sucess had so much worth going up against the state champions for a second time after a loss. This poem is not only excellent, but a source of insparation according to our interpretations. Good Job.

]]> http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=268&cpage=1#comment-5585 Samantha Acosta Tue, 14 Feb 2012 16:21:01 +0000 http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=268#comment-5585 @Felix cruz, I found your essay very interesting! I really enjoyed reading your description on this particular poem by Emily Dickinson. You really did a great job on explaining in detail each stanza individually. I like the fact that you use the phrases directly from the poem into the essay. Another thing that you pointed out that many did not was the rhyme pattern. I thought that was a very good point for the essay! I agree with you when you say " to appreciate your success NO MATTER how small you think it might be". You did a great job on this assignment keep up the good work! :)) @Felix cruz, I found your essay very interesting! I really enjoyed reading your description on this particular poem by Emily Dickinson. You really did a great job on explaining in detail each stanza individually. I like the fact that you use the phrases directly from the poem into the essay. Another thing that you pointed out that many did not was the rhyme pattern. I thought that was a very good point for the essay! I agree with you when you say ” to appreciate your success NO MATTER how small you think it might be”. You did a great job on this assignment keep up the good work! )

]]> http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=261&cpage=1#comment-5582 Robert Foster Tue, 14 Feb 2012 14:05:27 +0000 http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=261#comment-5582 @Nicole Jennings, I agree with your entire explication of this poem. I found it difficult to distinguish between the different stanza's of the poem, but you were able to do so. This is what I found most impressive about your explication. @Nicole Jennings, I agree with your entire explication of this poem. I found it difficult to distinguish between the different stanza’s of the poem, but you were able to do so. This is what I found most impressive about your explication.

]]> http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=261&cpage=1#comment-5581 Saarah Chaudhri Tue, 14 Feb 2012 13:17:19 +0000 http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=261#comment-5581 @James Gates, Love, love, LOVE the commentary you provided in the explication! You clearly get the point across and back it up with evidence that we can ALL relate too. Your explication has this certain flow, which keeps me interested and able to read with ease. The final paragraph which you include your personal experience is just exquisite! This has to be my favorite explication here. :) @James Gates, Love, love, LOVE the commentary you provided in the explication! You clearly get the point across and back it up with evidence that we can ALL relate too. Your explication has this certain flow, which keeps me interested and able to read with ease. The final paragraph which you include your personal experience is just exquisite! This has to be my favorite explication here.

]]> http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=261&cpage=1#comment-5580 Saarah Chaudhri Tue, 14 Feb 2012 13:06:43 +0000 http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=261#comment-5580 @Stephanie Castillo, I completely understand what you're saying!!!! In fact, it qualifies what I was saying inmy explication. I love how you clearly addressed the essay in a heartbeat, instead of feeding me fluff. However, I don't see much of your commentary, but a repetition of the lines within your explication. I would work on that because commentary is the key to a perfect paper! But other than that, good job Stephanie! @Stephanie Castillo, I completely understand what you’re saying!!!! In fact, it qualifies what I was saying inmy explication. I love how you clearly addressed the essay in a heartbeat, instead of feeding me fluff. However, I don’t see much of your commentary, but a repetition of the lines within your explication. I would work on that because commentary is the key to a perfect paper! But other than that, good job Stephanie!

]]> http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=261&cpage=1#comment-5579 Raymond wills Tue, 14 Feb 2012 13:06:07 +0000 http://grammar-worksheets.com/blog/?p=261#comment-5579 @James Gates, your essay really did speak to me james i liked the way you used the reference nobody is perfect. but the thing that really got to me on your essay was your explanation on the race that your never gave up on even though you and your team lost. i feel that what happen and the courage for you to succeed is what made you a winner that day. you have inspired me to keep going at whatever i do in life and finish strong no matter what. @James Gates, your essay really did speak to me james i liked the way you used the reference nobody is perfect. but the thing that really got to me on your essay was your explanation on the race that your never gave up on even though you and your team lost. i feel that what happen and the courage for you to succeed is what made you a winner that day. you have inspired me to keep going at whatever i do in life and finish strong no matter what.

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